!? how to write a poem

[mysteriousgirl]

[[align=center]I like this lesson
Thanks alot mysteriousgirl
This a poem For Our Football team


Our red team you are better than all
Give your power to put a goal
This is the time for playing a great football


Be hero and the best
Challenge the rest
You do well in your test[/align]

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beautiful and cheerin words y dear ... i loooooved them


i'm really happy that you understood it and did a great job sis

thanks .. and keep writing please [/align]

[mysteriousgirl]

I want to anderstand one thing .. Did we must end the sentens by seam litter



I know I am very bad in spilling

[align=center] hello brother

... welcome to the forum

and no .. sometimes you can find to words that sound a lie but end with different letters though it would make th poem more beautiful if you use words that end with the same letters [/align]

[gamar failka]

what a lesson


i've always wanted to learn how to write poems


thatx for the topic M.G

[longman]

[QUOTE=mysteriousgirl;1278915][align=center] nice ryhme longman

hope to see more of your comments

thanks [/align][/QUOT

i have a talent but i do not want to show it

[mysteriousgirl]

what a lesson


i've always wanted to learn how to write poems


thatx for the topic M.G

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heeeey sweety ... yea i once saw your reply that you wanted to learn writing poems so i thought this might help you


.... dont forget to how us what you learned

you're more than welcome [/align]

[mysteriousgirl]

[QUOTE=longman;1291391]

[align=center] nice ryhme longman

hope to see more of your comments

thanks [/align][/QUOT

[align=center]i have a talent but i do not want to show it

yea right

if you do have talents, then show us

:p why dont you read one of my poems and tell me what you think

then show us some of your talents

here's one is it me and you !?[/align]

[عشق الوطن]

i dont understand this word (poeam ::

[mysteriousgirl]

i dont understand this word (poeam ::

[align=center]it means

قصيدة أو أبيات شعرية [/align]

[ضيـــاء]

[align=center]Great work.... [/align]

[mysteriousgirl]

[align=center]Great work.... [/align]

[align=center] thanks dear .. hope to see your writings [/align]

[سجى الليل]

[align=center]a7em a7em

what do you think about this one



want to set alone ....want to cry....want to keep quiet ....JUST want to think about


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myself



what do u think [/align]

[سجى الليل]

[align=center]heeey

can you help me

how i can use same ryhme

want to cry ...want to be lonely...

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[فراولة]

Heyyyyy myserious
WOW what can I say a given person as you are usually .Yours just great and your lessons are wonderfull I would really like to write some poems I will be back to read each and every lesson carefully
Keep on shining honey
thanks

[mysteriousgirl]

[align=center]heeey

can you help me

how i can use same ryhme

want to cry ...want to be lonely...

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[align=center]hey sweety .. there's no rythme in your poem but the words are nice .. all you have to do is look for words that end with the same 2 letters and put then in the end of each sentence [/align]

[mysteriousgirl]

Heyyyyy myserious
WOW what can I say a given person as you are usually .Yours just great and your lessons are wonderfull I would really like to write some poems I will be back to read each and every lesson carefully
Keep on shining honey
thanks

[align=center]thanks for the sweet words you said farawla .. as usual a great comment .. waiting for you [/align]